Spider-Man and the Avengers struggle to stay one step ahead of Doctor Octopus and the Sinister Six. Can the heroes take out the villains through the courts? Or will they have to resort to their favorite method of discourse, I.E. VIOLENCE!

Written by Dan Slott

Illustrated by Stefano Caselli

Colored by Frank Martin

Lettered by VC’s Joe Caramagna

THE PLOT: As the leaders of the world converse in Rome over what decision to make regarding Doctor Octopus’ Global Warming scheme, Spider-Man and the Avengers arrive to reveal Al Gore as the Chameleon. Ock publically apologizes for the ruse and shows good faith by improving Earth’s atmosphere. Meanwhile, Horizon Labs is shut down by J. Jonah Jameson in revenge for…stuff.

LONG STORY SHORT: The Avengers track down the Sinister Six on a remote island, and a battle ensues. Mysterio and Electro are defeated, but one-by-one the Avengers are all taken down until Spider-Man is the only one standing.

MY THOUGHTS: This is another one of those “issues of preference” that comes by where I might not like or perfer something, but it doesn’t mean it’s an actual flaw in the storytelling of the comic. The more ASM issues I review, the more apparent it becomes that Dan Slott is having an absolute ball writing this title, and good for him. It’s great that a fan can finally achieve his dream of sitting in the writer’s chair and dictate Spidey’s life. For the most part, the stories have been pretty decent. Even if certain issues are legitimately horror-strickenly bad like the Betty issue, there’s still genuine effort put into it which is appreciable. Here, we have a solid if a bit padded chapter in “Ends of the Earth” where the bulk of the story could’ve taken place in about six pages, but Slott prolongs it not only for the trade, but for the sheer enjoyment of it.

I liked in this issue how Slott inserted a sense of believabilty to sell the threat of Doctor Octopus by having the world leaders meet, but a bit of it felt like someone playing with toys. I was sort of taken out of it with the President, Stephen Hawking and Al Gore all being in the same room. It felt too easy, like everyone whose opinions that matter would convene at the same time at the same place. Now maybe this isn’t as unlikely as I might think, and should a supervillain launch this maniacal plot in real life this would happen. It’s another personal thing that I have against Slott’s writing, where things just happen. Need technology? *POOF* Someone thought to make just the right thing for the exact situation months in advance. Need to be somewhere? “PING* There within a minute. I fully admit, this is nitpicking but it does affect my enjoyment of the series. On top of that, Slott is all too happy to play fast and loose with what people can and can’t do due to their occupations. Which leads me into my one and only but enormous legitimate con of the issue.

Jonah needs to be freakin’ shot.

There is a global crisis going around, and New York is blessed to have a think tank of scientists working with Stephen Hawking ’round the clock to save the day, and Jonah shuts off their power because he sees them as a menace. This is the point where Jonah’s lost any sort of micro-level sympathy and has become a full-out moron. It’s such an outrageous and obvious abuse of power that defies comprehension. Before when he was running the Bugle, it didn’t matter as much because at the end of the day he was a newsman. Making Spider-Man look bad was believable for him to do, even if the bias was apparent. In a position of political power, this is BS. What makes it even worse is that at no point does anyone say to Jonah “This kind of crap will get you impeached and exiled from the city.” I could almost buy it if Horizon was a sort of danger, but it’s not. Not any more than ESU or Midtown High or the Bugle itself that attracted the crux of the plot due to Peter’s involvement with it. Since the book reads as though Jonah’s just angry instead of completley unjustified and moronic, it falls under Betty Brant syndrome where the character whose made out ot be sympathetic is someone you want to have bad things happen to them. If Slott’s gonna continue to write Jonah this way, just kill him off. Seriously.

This story was basically a buildup to the fight at the end, so there’s not too much else to discuss in great detail. There were the little nitpicks I had, so just scroll down to the pros after I list the cons.

-Why is Horizon Labs populated by five scientists who all just happen to be Peter’s friends? Are there any others, like the ones we saw in #680.1, or are they not smart enough?

-Why during a major global crisis do the Horizon Labs scientists walk around slowly and pose with their hands in their pockets like their a part of a hipster rock band?

-Why are the leaders of the world so passive with Doc Ock and the Avengers? It’s like their for whoever speaks last.

-If you’re stabbed, are you really going to say to yourself “I am being stabbed? Why yes, I am! I wonder how that happened!” It’s the stinkin’ dialogue again, and I say to you why not have him think that in a thought balloon or thought caption? It was a set up for Rhino to exposition-speak, but in a fight where you’re fighting to kill you’re not going to explain to the guy you want to kill how you can now kill him. You just kill him and move on. Even if the guy wants to know, wouldn’t it be more evil to not tell him and let him die wondering? Alas…

Okay, enough whining. What did I like in this issue?

-Stefano Caselli is awesome, as always.

-I liked that the opening scene began with the Six finding gadgets and instrument which they would use later to defeat the Avengers. It promised the danger of the showdown all the more.

-Silver Sable’s return appearance was nice. I liked how she displayed confidence in Spider-Man, going back to their past history.

-The battle of wits between Spider-Man and Doc Ock was a fun parallel. Each man says to their allies “I got this. I’ve thought of everything, not to worry.” independently of each other. That was a fun turn around.

So 4 pros, 4 cons. How does this issue come down at the end?

 It’s your basic Dan Slott issue. Some melodrama, some laughs. Decent action. Pretty good art. I had a lot of problems, but they weren’t deal-breakers. Just annoyances. It’s okay.

3/5 webs

*EDIT* The way in which Captain America was taken out did make me laugh. It’s kind of ludicrous, but it’s too funny not to mention.

16 Responses to “The Amazing Spider-Man #683 Review”

  1. #1 Pete Wiggins says:

    I LOVE Thor’s expression in that panel above. It looks like he has a serious case of divine heartburn.

    Forget that cheap gag of Spidey punching out Chameleon-Al Gore; if you had to have the Chameleon impersonate someone, why not have him impersonate Jonah and pull this stunt, then have Jonah have to clear himself when the heat inevitably comes down. Instead, we have the real J. Jonah Jameson as Walter Peck, and I doubt he’ll face any ramifications whatsoever for this. Sigh. That being said:

    “Why during a major global crisis do the Horizon Labs scientists walk around slowly and pose with their hands in their pockets like their a part of a hipster rock band?”

    Hey, you guys! Quit goofing off and get on with your SCIENCE!

  2. #2 Sarcasmic says:

    I felt like this was Marvel’s version of Tower of Babel, just not with Spider-Man supplying the enemies with the means to take down his enemies. Having Cap being froze made me actually say, “Ouch that’s gotta suck” out loud. And I could totally see the Thor of Earth’s mightiest musing why he has been run through by a horn and the line made me chuckle. Especially after Thor took out Electro like a boss.

    I hated the exposition suit, the world leaders (The Chamelon gag had me going though), the way Hawkeye was taken out (his stupid glasses too) and Jonah though.

  3. #3 Enigma_2099 says:

    … is it just me, or is Cap spending a lot of time lately being inconveniently benched?

  4. #4 spideytothemax says:

    For a few pages there I thought Al Gore was a pile of bones at the bottom of an acid pit. And yeah, the stuff with Jonah is out of control. I’m hoping there’s some kind of explanation coming up.

    What exactly did Thor do to Electro? Looked like he freakin’ banished him from Earth, but Electro’s standing around with the others at the end of the book. Just shot him into the atmosphere I guess?

  5. #5 DCMarvelFanGuy says:

    Did… did Thor just kill Electro. He launched him up in the sky (to space?) and said “Midgard will never have to suffer you again” or something like that. That is crazy if it turns out to be true. But at the same time it is badass!!!!!

  6. #6 DCMarvelFanGuy says:

    Sorry meant to put a question mark in my first sentence. I am just EXHAUSTED! :P

  7. #7 Regless says:

    “-Why is Horizon Labs populated by five scientists who all just happen to be Peter’s friends? Are there any others, like the ones we saw in #680.1, or are they not smart enough?”

    Horizon labs seems to be centered around 7 elite scientists. I remember when Peter joined he was being interviewed because they had a space open and then needed a majority of the six. This is just me spit-balling since Horizon hasn’t been covered in that much detail yet but it seems the benefits of being one of the main seven. is getting your own private lab, and the freedom to work how and when you please provided you can come up with and complete project ideas and prototypes. And they aren’t all friends. I mean, you got Morbius, and Peter’s seemed to annoy or underwhelm Ms. Jaffrey every time they’ve said more than two word to each other. JJ being a douche kinda sucks, but I’m interested to see how Pete handles his lively hood being on the line again.

    Not sure about the others in 680.1. Could be intern scientists, Could be executives with 9-5s, couple be lawyers for patents and the like, or tradesmen to help build certain projects, could be visitors or heck, could just be all of the above. I mean. Horizon labs seems huge. even if it’s centered around the core 7 you’d need a lot more to run it.

  8. #8 Phantom Roxas says:

    I’ll assume that this takes place before AvX, but that’s just one of the downsides of having a self-contained world-spanning storyline, but Marvel continuity is all over the place these days anyway.

  9. #9 Sarcasmic says:

    At Phantom: Tell me bout it, Carnage USA is behind all the point one issues of Venom, the most recent issues of Venom, and three Secret Avengers issues.

  10. #10 Sarcasmic says:

    Scratch the point one issues.

  11. #11 Sir Jig-A-Lot says:

    What continuity? I heard all Marvel books were written as What If fanfic now. Just like DC’s reboot is really one huge line-wide Elseworlds event.

  12. #12 crutch says:

    i was hoping spidey really did hit al gore…..

  13. #13 Aaron Romero, Jr. says:

    I just put together the timeline for Venom, Secret Avengers, and Carnage USA in CrazyChris’s review. It took me an hour. Go look at it there. Don’t make me do it here again.

  14. #14 sthenurus says:

    I really loved this issue. Everything was great and casselie NEED to become the official artist for the title.

  15. #15 Mustached Avenger says:

    This story hasn’t been that bad, apart from the dialogue and the fact that people are ACTUALLY CONSIDERING LISTENING TO DOCTOR FRIGGIN OCTOPUS!!!

  16. #16 Venomoushatred1001 says:

    Thor lose to Rhino? Yeah, right.

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