It goes to show you. I’m lucky to break 10 comments with “Spidey Memories” or “Finding Gwen Stacy” but I retcon a scene or two the comments explode. This usually won’t be done twice in a day, but it deserved an encore. Remember, if you want to see the full image, click on it and it will blow up. This scene from “Amazing Spider-Man” issue 406 is very emotional. Peter and Mary Jane really are fascinated by her bowel movements.
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I hope I’m not stepping on Bertone’s shoes with this, but we haven’t had a spider-revision since November 2009. I saw this and it just screamed revision. Here is before and after.
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Hornacek on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: “@Aqu@: I read all of the 90s Venom mini-series and I don’t remember it ever being said there that Eddie…” May 5, 10:22
Aqu@ on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: “Aand that happens when you’re interrupted when writing a comment. It got cut. *history (but it does check out with…” May 5, 07:03
Aqu@ on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: ““No consistency among *today’s different Marvel writers” Mmh, from a quick look at a wiki, it seems Venom only convinced…” May 5, 06:58
Hornacek on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: “@Aqu@: “It’s also unfortunately true that symbiotes’ abilities often change from writer to writer.” Wait a minute, you’re telling me…” May 4, 09:11
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Aqu@ on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: “Yes, there’s a general consensus between writers that symbiotes can heal you, at least by accelerating your healing, sometimes by…” May 3, 09:22
Hornacek on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: “@Aqu@: You’re right about having a single strand connecting the host and the (separated) symbiote. Then again, these are the…” May 2, 08:22
Hornacek on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: “@Evan Berry: Yeah, that conversation between MJ and Peter on the girders was one of the ones I was thinking…” May 2, 08:19
Aqu@ on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: “@Hornacek If they did their homework, there should be at least a single filament of symbiote connecting them (or physical…” May 1, 06:49
Evan Berry on Craig’s Critique: Amazing Spider-Man #27 (Legacy #991): “The Real Torment Was The Ending” or “MJ Lets Torment Go”: “@Hornacek – I also thought I’d seen Mary Jane separate herself from the symbiote — like when she and the…” Apr 30, 13:09




This is funny, but all indications are that MJ was still pregnant and lost the baby in the new continuity. The only difference is that she got knocked up by her live-in boyfriend and not a husband.
And just like Brand New Day…It stinks!!!
You guys are stealing Jimmy Kimmel’s censored segment. It was a beautiful moment. Keep it that way. They’re crying ’cause “it’s gas!”?!? Ugh!!!
I laughed out loud at Berryman.
Forget that, George, now every time I get gas, I’ll be worried I’m pregnant with baby May!
From now on, when I have gas… I will always wonder if it’s because an EIC mandated the end of a marriage I no longer know about. This haunts me, Bertone. =)
I know gas makes me emotional…
I’m giggling like a schoolgirl right now. Nice work! 😀
Wow, sooo funny! I love it!
I like this even better than the first one.
This honestly depresses me horribly. See you all in hell. *jumps out the window*
Bwahahahaha omg, you guys are really on to something here! I’m lovin’ it! Freedom of Speech, baby! Long live Crawlspace! hahahahhahahahahaaa